Well! I like this randomness. (:
Tomboys are always good to write about- although in personal experience it's just their moody, stubborn and 'I-can-do-anything-you-can' attitude I love writing about in novels and such. You captured it well and there is such humour there and it isn't overemphasized!
It would be interesting to see where else this is going. I'll definitely be back. (:

so gordy was asking terry something and terry was ignoring him so
then gordy asked her to date him and terry stopped. she wasn't sure ...