good start, but as the chapters progressed, it was a little hard to read because of the spacing. try spacing it out a bit :)
that said, i liked the story, especially the title.
keep writing!
and check out mine? :)
s/3071331/1/A-Broken-Melody

Guess who I am? xD
Good going behbeh! :P
You seem so boring otherwise : You're filled with love :D 3

This story was quite lovely.
I didn't think it was possible, but you incorporated practically every symbolic item and cliche in the genre that is romance. And I say cliche with due respect; I love, love, LOVE our prestigious genre. Let's see: you have rain. A heroine crying. A heroine wearing a lovely, red dress. You have a violin singing its beautiful agony. You have France. And you have the Eiffel Tower.
Wow! c:
I can see this story emanates from deep within your bosom. I, myself, am waiting for love. Many of us are. Trust me when I say you're not alone.
I don't want you sulking from loneliness. Instead, express yourself! Write more lovely stories like this one.