Reviews for You
Guest 12/29/12 . chapter 1
Oh God, continue this? I deeply wonder for the story behind "you" and for where they have gone now, where they were before, what changed and grew and bled in to a jump of hopelessness. You hold great power in little words.
keekee33 10/25/12 . chapter 1
Very beautiful. Wish it was longer
Guest 10/22/12 . chapter 1
Oh, God. Something about this hurts. It lingers, you know? Amazing.
we are not shining stars 10/22/12 . chapter 1
This is so intriguing and bittersweet. It's sadly beautiful.
Spark Writer 10/22/12 . chapter 1
Wow! This made my day in unbelievable amounts and ways. So lovely, stunning, melancholy and poignant. I'm writing this through a screen of bittersweet tears. LOVE this.

-Spark Writer-
Crimsonovel 10/22/12 . chapter 1
Wow, this was very dark, yet lovely. The bit about a new coat of varnish was brilliant.
I'm very curious to see what this is all about. Please, continue this!