|Reviews for The Program|
| myheart4you 10/31/12 . chapter 1
This seems to be an original version of the book Uglies... I would comment on that but I know you are just writing it for fun :)
I liked it, anyhow.
One thing you could definitely fix is making sure you stay in one tense. You kept switching from past to present tense the whole time, which made it sort of choppy.