Guest T***A N: :D i'll write more, so don't worry... but Geneva Story will have to wait... i have three others to finish! or maybe not! So did you read any other story? i posted Time heals only the heal-able, it's actually progressing, i added a hooking chapter.. :D And did you read abandoned yet? its a short story!

wait what?! this was supposed to be the end?! you deff need to add one more chapter! you should develop their friendship a bit more and adda bit what happpened in the 6 months, before you said that when sue asked william to go to church he vsaid no but now is..maybe how he grew closer to God, how her aunt appologized and her heart was changed as well...then their wedding day.
Also make this a series and write what happens to her cousin cuz before she said that william was hers, so maybe how she finds love of her own.

wow..what a chapter...so full of diff emotions...idk though that the way she spoke to her aunt was an ok way, I mean that was extremely rude, she should speak up and not cower like her mom did, but at least there should be some respect to her aunt as she being an elder or older than her, and also considering sue is a christian her answer should be slightly different...oh and is 6 months talking about her getting married?:)

lovin it...it sad that william misunderstood her hope that clears up:) did you check out the website i showed you? ...im on there as well:) as "sunshin3"

love this whole story! i'm not saying this cuz i'm your sis but i really mean i love it!

Geneva jumped and coldly stared at her "How did you get in here, it was empty…"..huh? explain more a bit here...otherwise I love it:)

wow...really good...Im loving it!

really good...I love this story!

I think you may have some talent on your hands. (though this coming from a poet...) Good work! :)

ok now this is perfect! one more thing ad dhow/ that he fell, cuz when you are saying standing in front of her and then he is already in the leaves is kinda wow this is great!

well...idk...it is good..just idk feels like something about it needs to be changed...like their interaction...i know you've worked with it for a while..but still..its not as good as the previous chapter...you kinda still gotta escalate the feelins a bit more..and then down in second part...and i think it needs to be longer, plus you need a transition like how she left to go back up...cuz all of a sudden she is in her bedroom..but otherwise its good:) just need a few touch ups..

ok now you really got the attention with full force..cant wait to read what happens next!

wow very intriguing!