Aww, I loved it. Very cute story. I knew they would get back together. I am glad he almost punched his brother's lights out...very cruel joke. Great joke even if you were only 13. Please check the chapters again. Chapters 8 and 9 are the same, but still like before great story!

Too funny...she really didn't have to ask if he still loved Jen. Just look at his login::BillandJen4ever...speaks volumes to me...LOL!

I liked it! Very cute story. You may want to check the chapters though. Chapters 3 and 4 are the same and there is no chapter 5, but I still think the story flows. Please update the changes. I still liked the story either way. Keep writing!