gosh dat was sweet update reguralrly :)

Wow, I'm not sure if he's just abusive or slightly sadistic... interested to see what might happen next.

good stry cont soon make d chapters long

great start

Hmm... this was an interesting chapter... i wonder if Sofia has feelings for Sameer... she's acting very weird, like something's wrong... waiting for your next update :)

it's interesting to see where this could be going... update soon with a bit of a longer chapter and i might have more to say!

:)

Okay I'm loving the chemistry! It's so awesome! Their conversation was entertaining and I cannot wait to see what's in store for these two!

"Those exuberant girls were getting on my nerves after a while when they could not let their little cousin to even enter the damned room."

Haha I cannot tolerate such exuberance during such situations as well. So annoying! But that's just me.

yay. Okay nice. But too short- the chapter I mean. Could've been longer. But I can't wait to read more!

THE FIESTINESS. I love this! So awesome how the words just flow with fire and I could feel the chemistry between Sameer and Zain- so electrifyingg!