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| Reviews for Assassin |
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   phantom130 5 5/10/13 . chapter 1Wow, intense opening! Curious where the story is going to go from here O_O |
| Swordy McSwordy 3/29/13 . chapter 5 Hmm... That makes a good ending for a chapter, but I just don't think it feels... final enough to end the story, even if there is a sequel. It just seems a bit abrupt. Awesamosa story though, sister! Swordy |
| Swordy McSwordy 3/29/13 . chapter 4 Ok, the whole perfect timing of the blacksmith was a bit annoying, but the surprise ending made up for it. The bold writing did help the drama, I'll have to use that myself sometime... Found a few spelling mistakes but nothing TOO bad. Swordy |
| Swordy McSwordy 3/29/13 . chapter 3 'Make friends with the floor' Hehe. That's going into my list of life mottos... Also, thanks for the drunken translations! Swordy PS. Did you DRAW that cover? Do you have a deviantArt account? |
| Swordy McSwordy 3/29/13 . chapter 2 Yup, still like all the names (which is pretty rare as there are a lot of names I don't like...) The 'Reaper' name is a bit cliched, but overall I like the story. When/where is this story set? The swords and scythe are medieval, but Cely (hehe) used a gun, too... What kinds of things has Cely been fighting that can break a (steel? Some kind of otherworldly metal?) scythe? I MUST KNOW! Swordy |
| Swordy McSwordy 3/29/13 . chapter 1 Woah. That was an awesamosa beginning... I don't normally like present tense writing (as I suck at it) but that was great! The story does seem a bit gothic and dark, but hey, I've wanted to read something like that recently! All this talk about assassins makes me want to play Assassin's Creed... Swordy PS. I love the names, too! |
| Paige Terner 1/29/13 . chapter 5 REVENGE! Whoop! |
| Paige Terner 1/29/13 . chapter 4 NOOO! CELESTIA! Stupid Francisco. |
| Paige Terner 1/29/13 . chapter 3 Silencers, you gotta admit , are useful: That would be some major pwnage if he heard that and, you know, was alive. Awesome! |
| Paige Terner 1/29/13 . chapter 2 "B-but… you're royalty." Rolando repeated as if to convince himself. There goes his chance, down the dirty, dirty drain. Does that mean he likes her? Ooooh... No! Save the Rosenbaum family! |
| Paige Terner 1/29/13 . chapter 1 Whoa! This guy's sadistic. Shocking, though, to see that he would do that. |
| Skullface 12-23-1994 11/17/12 . chapter 2 I can't help but se this almost as an anime series. At least that is how I picture the scenes and all. I am enjoying this story, but I don't understand why they say. 'For the love of Death.' an you explain please? |
| Skullface 12-23-1994 11/17/12 . chapter 1 This was a good chapter, and, I think you have given me something to read for the next coming months. I thank you for introducing this to me Mistress Madness |
| jakbnimble 10/30/12 . chapter 3 So action-packed! I feel bad for Celestia and Leonardo, but I was happy to see them beginning to connect at the end of chapter 2. This is a very cool and frightening world that you've created here! |
| Kaijeno 10/30/12 . chapter 3 Really tam this is your project ...but still harass nice one sis |
