Short, but impendingly powerful nonetheless. A chilling account of unstable mentality.

...My kinda poetry. May I say, you are talented. Great work

-sapphire

i know the feeling, unfortunately. your imagery is very strong in this piece, and i like the look of the poem on the page.

"All through" as suppose to "All Though"... other than that, it was a very unique poem. Reminds me of my brain being filled with bothersome thoughts and I can't get to what I want. :)

beautiful. good job!