This may share a base plot with your fanfiction, but varies greatly in many ways. Poe and Mallory's attitudes were very interesting. I really like warrior women, so that's a huge plus. Both the six year olds were cute. Quirky families are always nice to read about. Hmm bananas and tomatoes sound good together.

a pleasant read that i'm happy to say was the best part of my day. the plot and adorable characters are extremely well written.

Awwww, love the ending and the story!

Another good story from you. I liked this couple, for the fact that they were new in their personalities and looks. I liked how innocent this story goes in the beginning and then starts to get more serious. They were also very funny in some moments, which is a plus to me. The fighting was a good addition, since in most of your stories, there's not that many fights (excluding the stories in FanFiction). The ending felt like, there could be more for this couple, like there's some unfinished business, like there could more into it. It's still a good story, even without a sequel.

The score I give to this story is a 9/10.

Firstly, my apologies for being a slack arse and not reviewing your last few stories more often. I have no viable excuses to offer you.

Secondly, you continue to blow my mind with your writing. You always manage to develop scenarios that are not cliche and overused, characters that are well rounded and realistic, and then you build a fusion of the two that keeps me loyal and waiting for more.

Well done and as always thank you.

Freaking fantastic story, great job!

woooot! so full of win! happy that ended well tho I think the gorilla needs to pay poe for damaged done.

Well that was a nice ending.

Loved it. I read and waited for every chapter which it was definitely worth the wait. Great job on the story and thanks for posting it :).

wonderful. can't wait for your next story.

Very nice ending to a good story. Can't wait to read what you have in store next :)

Well I have to say that the fight scene was quite unexpected but I'm glad things turned out ok but at the same time I do hope for another story with these two because they are quite the couple and though I can't imagine what could happen beyond this point I wouldn't mind some additional chapters about their life after Mallory leaves her job and what happens with Poe friend Nadi. Well I look forward to your next fic and I hope all is well.

RJ

Bah. I should have read it slower so it would have lasted longer!
Can't wait for whatever else stories pop into your head.
-Until Next Time!

It's a wonderful ending with images of a wonderful future for these to wonderful characters. Um, did I tell you it's wonderful? :-p

Great job. Thank you so much for sharing.

Hooray. Sad to see a good story ending, but looking forward to your next one.