Fantastic title - this is what drew me in, and is perhaps one of the best titles I've come across on here. I also love the lines "Self-hate, mixed in / Being / A very prominent story" - really fascinating, and also somewhat disturbing and sad to picture how prominent the "stories" are. I'd love to see more hints about the content and motivation for the stories. Well done.

Written exceptionally well, and beautifully. Keep it up :D

Oh my god, I love this. This is absolutely amazing in every single way. I especially love the title. Amazing. Pure amazing. Keep it up. (: