|Reviews for Swords|
| MimiTheAwesomeness 4/4/13 . chapter 4
Good job ma brother! You are really developing a story here :)
| AoideMythos 3/18/13 . chapter 4
Make sure you proof read too! Don't always rely on your editor. XD
Otherwise, this was good. Update soon!
| Qouc Minh 2/2/13 . chapter 3
Sorry im slow got alot of school work
| Guest 1/25/13 . chapter 3
I feel bad that Shawn has to fight Hamon, but surely Shawn will win.
I'm rooting for you buddy!
| Guest 1/25/13 . chapter 2
Now that's what I'm talking about!
| Guest 1/25/13 . chapter 1
Dude, keep writing!
| MimiTheAwesomeness 12/28/12 . chapter 3
YEAH-EHEH! Lots of dialog!
"I would never put you through all that training if you couldn't win," -Dad
I like that line.
Hamon sounds mean, "I'm going to kill you, midget." -Hamon
See my point?
Mimi OUT! :3
| AoideMythos 12/25/12 . chapter 3
Hey, good going, bro! You should keep writing, I want to know if Shawn beats Hamon! XD
| Qouc Minh 11/15/12 . chapter 2
| anhanh 11/1/12 . chapter 2
Wow... Um... A lot of Violence, eh?
I didn't now you, my little brother, would write about this...
Actually I do expect it. :l
Can you explain what the characters looks like? They look like blobs to me right now :I
| MimiTheAwesomeness 11/1/12 . chapter 2
Eww! The sword is covered with blood! He better wash that sword of his or else he'll give infection to anything else he cuts.
| AoideMythos 11/1/12 . chapter 2
Dude, write more please! "Hi-yah!"-Me, pretending to use a sword. XD
I can't wait to read another chapter!
| MimiTheAwesomeness 10/31/12 . chapter 1
What's the surprise? A sword, dragon, Pony? It's probably a Pony, but if not, then a sword.
| anhanh 10/29/12 . chapter 1
Cool story little brother!
My, my... I wonder what is the surprise.
A sword? armor? something else? What could it be? _-_
... wait don't tell! I can read it when you post again.
Your writing skills got better since you joined fiction press and started writing.
Writing for fun is FUN .
In the next chapter, please write about what they look like please.
| AoideMythos 10/29/12 . chapter 1
Haha, bro that sounds like you! XD
"Yes! Finished it! New record, 1 minute!"-Shawn
He acts a lot like you, which is pretty cool! :-P
I'm looking forward to more! :-)