Good job! Very angry and the thought comes across very clearly.

:( wow. im sorry that your upset :( i bet this helped though. i know writing and getting everything sorted out on paper always seems to make everything alittle better. if it's any consolation, i think this is beautiful (even though it's sad) and i know you probably posted this just to get out alittle anger, but i love the patern this is in. i dont know, but i feel like there are several small paterns that are all intertwined and work together. if you didnt intend for that, that makes it even better lol

but anyway, back to the content of the poem, i feel like i can relate to this. some people just blame everything on you, while they're the ones who truly deserve it. im sorry, i really hope you feel better
-steph135

hehe it is angry! like i feel the need to punch out at the air while i read it, awesome job at conveying that emotion! i also liked how you didn't take all the blame here, you let the person know hey this time its you, i'm not always the bad one! i loved that note!