Hi sorry about the schedule thing that was apart of my word edition of this and i forgot to take it out before uploading. Also sorry about the grammar. I am not supposed to use my computer, so writing the chapter is taking a pretty long time but am still writing it. I have a few test that i need to study so that is also taking up some of my time as well but i am working on the next chapter.

i didnt like the whole like half the chapter being the schedule and that didnt really make sense to me because it was so long and individual lines and the days they where on it confused me haha. anyways im interested and excited to read and learn more about the characters so keep writing, im looking forwards to a new chapter! :)

To be honest, I do like the idea of the story and the writing style, but the mistakes in grammar and spelling are very distracting. Try throwing a word spellcheck over it before posting, it would be nicer to read.
Still, nice job on the story itself! Looking forward to the next chapter!