I am so sorry about this site. It seems like some of the throw-away romances get the most reviews, and true gems, like this story, have no recognition. Truly, this story deserves much more attention. Let me think about what I want to say. The whole idea itself is intriguing. This book. Even the title is a little screwy, but in a beautiful way. Strangely, I love Jay. I love that he isn't some sixteen year old kid. I love Playa. I love the prose, the writing, pretty much everything about it. Thank you for writing this work. Know that I will be anxiously waiting for each and every chapter to come.

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Interesting, I like it alot. It reminds me a bit of the book "The Neverending Story" if you don't mind the comparison. The only thing that threw me off was the "wealth of expectations". When you use that phrase, I think of "Wealth of knowledge" or a "wealth of experience" which means an abundance of those things... but this seems different. I feel like there needs to be a clearer explanation of what it is, otherwise it's a bit too vague and you lose me when it's mentioned. If it's simply the price put on expectations, there is probably a better way to say it.