Aww. I wonder why he's like that. It's so sad that he'd make someone cry with no regrets :( Awesome chapter, though.

I can't believe how good you are at writing. If you wrote a book, I'd read it :) Amazing chapter, girl.

Oh! So good. So, SO good! Karrin is the girl right? She has to be. I really hope that she is. *fingers crossed* You are doing a fantastic job on this story Gem! I am loving it. _

Such a unique idea, and a brilliant ending line. Glad you'll upload soon because of the NaNo:)

Wow. I love this, and I don't really dish that out much. Gaaah this is so well written. Great job, you.

Ack! This is SO flipping good! Like amazingly good. Brilliantly good. Fantastically good! I am so intrigued! _ See... I knew that NaNo was a good idea :)

*squee* So good! _ So totally amazingly good! I'm so psyched that you're doing NaNo w/ me (my story will be posted later today) and this is so intriguing already. _ Keep up the amazing work Gem!