|Reviews for Bitter Man|
| Eleantris 12/26/12 . chapter 1
I love this. It's short, but packs so much emotion and thought in. :)
| Valenteen 11/26/12 . chapter 1
So vivid in description. I love you use of repetition in this poem, and the story behind it.
| Lolitroy 11/14/12 . chapter 1
I have to be honest... I feel pity for the man .
| Meadow Frost 11/7/12 . chapter 1
I can not tell you enough how much I love your work. Your imagery is just amazing and beautiful, it's like you painted me a picture with just your words.
This piece is just so beautiful.
| DarkInkyDreamer 11/5/12 . chapter 1
This piece builds a beautiful image, very...it's just...wow!
| Mylilblackpen 11/3/12 . chapter 1
I can almost pick a scruffy young man whose struggling for breath while clutching some injury waiting for death to inevitably come. The imagery I think is so beautiful and powerful that the reader almost feels powerless to help the speaker because it seems the war has already been lost. A beautiful piece which almost suggests the moral of it's better to die happy then die bitter and alone. I think it's another fine piece to add to your stunning collection.
| Naver 11/2/12 . chapter 1
I'm a little confused about the message. It reminds me of stubborn people.. Great as always! :)
| TheGlycoprotein 11/2/12 . chapter 1
This is absolutely brilliant. The imagery you create is so intensely beautiful: you can picture it. His mud-strewn hair, his chest heaving as he tries to breathe, sheathed in the mist. One of your finest, most definitely :D