Reviews for Murder Of La Luna (Ex-murderer book 2)
EverlastingBlueSkyXD 4/10/13 . chapter 18
No problem! XD I think I speak for all of us when I say "we're always here to help!" Correct me if I'm wrong. :)
Kathryn Claire O'Connor 4/10/13 . chapter 18
Thanks for mentioning me here! I'll definitely go check out the other book. Good job on this one.:)
EverlastingBlueSkyXD 4/9/13 . chapter 17
Wait wait wait...ROSE DIED?
EverlastingBlueSkyXD 4/7/13 . chapter 16
Yay! XD Glad to see you're still alive and writing! Two things. One: check some of the spelling. (Just a few words, nothing more. And for their family names I don't think you need the apostrophe.) Two: Maybe you shouldn't rush things too much. I kinda felt like you were during the previous chapters. Take your time. Also, I KNEW IT! I KNEW THAT NOTE WAS FOR HER! BWAHAHAHAHAHA!
EverlastingBlueSkyXD 3/21/13 . chapter 15
Even fewer! XD Anyways, good work, as always. :) (I'm starting to run out of things to say LOL. )
EverlastingBlueSkyXD 2/26/13 . chapter 14
A few mistakes, sometimes with punctuation and grammar. But overall it was fine and understandable. I suggest a bit more proofreading though. And adding lines between changes in character perspective. Sometimes you miss that and the story is bit confusing then. But the chapter is great and I look forwards to the next one.
EverlastingBlueSkyXD 2/10/13 . chapter 13
...So glad they didn't die...
EverlastingBlueSkyXD 2/5/13 . chapter 12
Oh no...they're gonna live, right?
EverlastingBlueSkyXD 1/25/13 . chapter 11
...Is Zoe that bad on the harmonica...?
EverlastingBlueSkyXD 1/15/13 . chapter 10
...Damn, what's gonna happen next? XD
EverlastingBlueSkyXD 1/11/13 . chapter 9
...I liked her grandmother...too bad she died soon after she first made an appearance...
EverlastingBlueSkyXD 12/20/12 . chapter 8
Wow...rough night...
EverlastingBlueSkyXD 12/17/12 . chapter 7
LOL MATT'S NOTES AND COMMENTS! XD
EverlastingBlueSkyXD 12/13/12 . chapter 6
LOL Matt's joke made me laugh as well. Great chapter! XD PLEASE UPDATE SOON! XD
EverlastingBlueSkyXD 12/13/12 . chapter 5
That is so cool...
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