|Reviews for Mai Soli|
| beverlyamethyst16 2/6/13 . chapter 11
Awwww :( Hope you're back soon!
| AGirlWithABrokenSmile 1/7/13 . chapter 10
So very sweet, I can't wait until the day they kiss. It'll be exciting for us, readers. But maybe Ali will be either shocked or something...
I wish the chapters would be longer, but then it'll probably take longer to write... and I don't like waiting...
I feel bad for Ali, its sad that her parents are never around. My parents work all the time and they don't have time for a lot of other things...
Ali! Denial is not just a river in Egypt. Just saying.
| beverlyamethyst16 1/7/13 . chapter 10
Haha they are VERY cute when in denial :) I enjoyed hearing about Ali's past. Great chapter! And have I mentioned before that I love the cover? Well I do!
| bookppl93 1/6/13 . chapter 10
Awwwwww yeah this was adorable :) I swear.. Why didnt Ali kiss him :((
| Starsis 1/6/13 . chapter 10
awesome! how do they not realize how awesome they are for each other?! it's driving me insane! in a good way : )
| AGirlWithABrokenSmile 12/30/12 . chapter 9
Can't wait for the next chapter as usual. I really love this story.
I always feel soooo bad for Abi though! But at the same time I get really irritated by her behavior. Its just...UGH! She met Zane! Why can't she let the Xavier/Ali thing go?
The bullying from Shannon irritates me too. I haven't encountered bullying in my life yet so I can't relate to it all. But she's so...*grimace*
I can't for the next chapter for this. If you get it on January 5th, I'll be overjoyed because there is so much happening on that day.
See you next year! Sorry for the long review! It would've been longer but then I would be rambling about so many things.
See ya! :)
| beverlyamethyst16 12/29/12 . chapter 9
I think Abi is a little bitter :( What's up with that Zane kid hmmm? And I'm so proud of Ali for having some candy :P
Haha great chapter! Definitely not boring!
I can't wait to see what will happen next chapter with Ali telling Xavier about her parents and all. Hopefully no fights ;)
| bookppl93 12/29/12 . chapter 9
Cute :3 Mmmm maybe I should draw them too.
| AGirlWithABrokenSmile 12/27/12 . chapter 8
THAT WAS SO SWEET! I just feel sooooo bad for Abi though! I can't wait until Xavier reveals who he likes! So exciting!
Update soon! I can't wait! Who's your favorite character in this story?
| beverlyamethyst16 12/24/12 . chapter 8
I LOVED it :D
Well the fact she put the bag of candy in the cupboard means there is some hope she'll eat it... right? haha
Xavier so likes her :P
| Starsis 12/24/12 . chapter 8
:) Merry Christmas! XD And i was just reading a story about Halloween! :)
| bookppl93 12/23/12 . chapter 8
YAAY my iPod decided to helpful :3 and I love Xavier. Can you just send him to me? I promise to keepy him properly fed and he has a room in my closet with his name on I :3
| beverlyamethyst16 12/19/12 . chapter 7
Awww so cute ;) Have I said that before? Oh well I really mean it!
Xavier is adorable! :D
| bookppl93 12/17/12 . chapter 7
| AGirlWithABrokenSmile 12/17/12 . chapter 7
I feel bad for Abi but so happy for Ali!
Oh, update soon! Can't wait for the next chapter in this and Pins and Needles!