Despite being so short, this says so much! I love it!

Awww. Sad, yet despite that expreamly beautiful and written extreamly well!

"Grabbing hold of my heart
You shake its foundation."
Would have to be my favorite line! I adore it! Also, the last line as well. Very unique and creative in the way it was written. This poem had emotion and emphasis in the most unique ways! Lovely, keep it up! :D

A great poem. I liked the emotional connection between the speaker and the reader. Keep writing.

This is like an emotional roller coaster ride. It shook me up, but I still enjoyed it.

I felt the emotion in this one. Very good, I think you are doing a great job. Continue to write. :)