Amazing story! Please update!
You can write a story without love interest. But it's always better with some in it. But I don't like love triangles in this particular story... doesn't really fit... still, only flaw. Really good, otherwise. Keep up the good work!

...Would be much better.

Above all though, really good, imgainative, well written story i will take pleasure in reading more of. Please update.

I must apologise for having my review in different parts- my phone is acting up andnposting the review before im ready, forcing me to write another. I can only hope youve recieved the ones beforehand. If not, dont worry much.

Im Stolen and will follow once Ive . Update soon!

...However, the love triangle with two brothers is a widely used spectacle and unorogional. Straightforward falling in love and having that as a side relatiomnship rather then half dominating the story and contradicting with its general stature as you have dobe would be much better

...strengthening and defining the relationships with her family. Also, the way she instinctively knows how to kill the behemoth is less then plausible, perhaps provide some type of explanation like having been told stories of it or seeing pictures ect?

Empathy with the reader doesn't resound clearly in this story. Give her some hardship readers can relate to and a bond before hand with other characters eg her sister- the way she purposely makes herself an outcastq through no fault of her peers doesn't increase my liking of her.

FYI, love intrest does not need to bw in a story if this type though written correctly it makes it more interesting. However, the love triangle

Excellent start to the story... Coming along very well, as you said, as a skeleton for a real novel.

To flesh it out a bit more I suggest you put another few chapters or so at the beginning talking about her life in her village, stregthening and defining the realtionships

Oh, this seems to be going in an interesting direction! I've only gotten through the first chapter, but hopefully I'll get more in tomorrow. Great so far.

such a long story but really good