| Reviews for The City That Died |
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Girlinblue24 5/6/13 . chapter 1Seriously, I know you said nothing would happen to it, but... I want more. |
Crystallea1321 12/5/12 . chapter 1Hmmmm, interesting, but too short. Please elaborate? I like it though, very poetic. Although, lied should be lay and miasma is spelled like this. That was all I noticed, and these are my helpful hints. Good job. |
Lolitroy 11/27/12 . chapter 1Oh I see. I see. |
ForeverARedHead 11/14/12 . chapter 1Very beautiful, I like how as short as it is, pulled so much detail. Great job! |
My.Jesters.Tears 11/3/12 . chapter 1I loved this! :3 |