|Reviews for Light in the Depths|
| TheMindSculptor 2/27/13 . chapter 4
This chapter was great! I can't wait to see how Ondine and Quinn interact with each other!
| TheMindSculptor 2/27/13 . chapter 3
I like this a lot :) i really want to know more about Ondine's relationship with her family and her life in the water before she gets taken. Who are her parents? Is she pretty much a loner? Is it common for mermaids to prefer to be alone over being with their families? These are just some things i would like to know about her.
Anyway, great job! This chapter definitely created some suspense. This story is so fun!
| TheMindSculptor 2/27/13 . chapter 1
I really liked this first chapter. I'll admit I'm a little wary of mermaid stories, but this seems like a fun read. Good job :) I'll be reading more!
| BrownEyedCutie99 2/14/13 . chapter 17
I don't think it was sappy. I think it was beautiful. It would probably sound really sappy if someone read this chapter out loud, but it was necessary for us to see how Ondine fells about Quinn. I can't wait to see Quinn's sappy thoughts. BTW: Is Clemmie bisexual?
| trollalalala 2/13/13 . chapter 16
I was too lazy to log in, so here goes a review.
Clementine's personality was quite amusing, and this chapter was nice, as usual!
| BrownEyedCutie99 2/11/13 . chapter 15
Is this ex-girlfriend going to be a problem? Why didn't Ondine turn into a mermaid? Is it because she is "attached" to Quinn? Is Ondine going to realize how much she loves Quinn after she finds out who the girl she was reasently talking to is?
| trollalalala 1/17/13 . chapter 14
This is great so far! The funny incident at the end was refreshing, and it was nice to see Ondine warming up to Quinn
| trollalalala 1/9/13 . chapter 13
Yes, I agree, the content is fine for the current rating.
this was a great chapter. The spoken dialogue between Quinn and Ondine is great. I really liked it.
| BrownEyedCutie99 1/5/13 . chapter 12
Will she become a mermaid again? She has to because I liked it when she was a mermaid. I love mermaids and now her usual life has been taken away from her? Was this the only way you could let Ondine and Quin stay together?
| trollalalala 1/5/13 . chapter 12
xD too lazy to log in.
Great two chapters! The description is great.
| Nintendo Fan 101 1/4/13 . chapter 11
I love mermaid stories, so reading this was right up my alley!
| trollalalala 12/3/12 . chapter 9
I can't wait for an update!
You are doing excellently so far.
| trollalalala 12/3/12 . chapter 4
Great descriptions of Ondine's situation!
| trollalalala 12/3/12 . chapter 3
Oh my goodness!
I think I should write a longer review this time:
-It is nice to see a writer who uses proper grammar and punctuation!
-The dialogue is wonderful. The way you wrote the sailor(?)'s speech was perfect!
-Bringing in a conflict is great! I can't wait to see how this all comes into play.
Things to work on:
Perhaps longer chapters, that's all.
| trollalalala 12/3/12 . chapter 2