|Reviews for The figure|
| Grace 1/16/13 . chapter 1
This one had me on edge!
| Lina M 1/2/13 . chapter 1
Is this going to be developed into a novel? Or a longer short story?
Either way the story has great promise. It needs a good dose of editting but I like the idea and although the language can be altered here and there, it is good and engaging.
| soulhuntingshewolf 11/7/12 . chapter 1
this is very creep, but in a good way.
| Kurt Kyre 11/6/12 . chapter 1
The run on paragraph style is distracting, but it's pretty well written. A few spelling errors (warmpth, spigot, and some lower case i's need to be fixed. You have a great sense of terror here, with the way the antagonist drags her out of the shower... he's pretty scary. Good stuff.
| Blargh1234 11/3/12 . chapter 1
Wow...Despite some grammatical errors this is absolutely amazing. I love it :D