Hey are you going to write more to this please it's really wonderful.

So that was interesting so the gainling had his magic link with fire stolen by a shade... Can't wait for the next chapter..

Wow, this looks like quite an original idea for an urban fantasy. I like your characters and how they interact with each other. I'm really looking forward to finding out more about this world!
-C'S'xxx

Highly interesting story I will live to read it all and am glad that you have kept up the quick updates..

Hi... It's a good story though it is a bit hard to connect with. Unlike Arbiter which was interesting and fairly easy to understand this one makes me ask a lot of questions. Your main characters are going strong so keep up the good work. Now the reason why I said that was:- Lucre and Ruin. Who is Ruin? Why does she affect Lucre so much?
2) Who is Thomas Vault? You might have mentioned who he was in the earlier chapters but when I re-read this I didn't see any mention of him.
Anyway you've managed to capture my attention so I'll be waiting for the rest of the chapters!:)
3) Do they live in our world ? I think they do but I'm not sure
I hope you answer these questions in the chapters to come!