Wow, intense. I don't know what to make of Ether. He's so aloof and distant yet comes to her rescue. And the situation with her father is so sad. It seems like a complicated relationship between the two and her past and present. I wish it was fleshed out a little more but maybe we'll learn more in coming chapters? Anyway good job. Happy writing!

I loved your book. It was very funny and some situations hit home for me but you portrayed how one feels in that type of situation very tastefully. I'd very much like to read the next one.

Can't wait to read the sequel :D
and thanks so much for the shout out. I assure you that you are as equally (or more) awesome as I. :)
yay! Excitement

YAY! :D SO FREAKING EXCITED :D
And where is your review for opposites attract? haha take your time!

LOVED THISSSSSSS! GAWH! This was just toooooo wonderful! Awww... so awesome. I really realllllly loved Ether's character. I can't wait to read the sequel!

Well I am a mother of three...and it was toward the end of my 4th month beginning of my 5th month when I felt kicking. I had two natural births and one c-section (middle child and my girl). I was very lucky with my boys...I had my oldest and youngest within 3 hours of arriving at the hospital...My csection was due to a condition that is rarely seen..I stalled at 8 centimenters and was rushed into having an emergency c-sect...no spouse...general anesthesia...I had a condition called Bandl's ring...my uterus never thinned out...I was in the hospital for 5 days...had over 300 internal stitches and 32 external staples...not fun but worth it!

continue writing...PLEASE!

To be honest, I don't think a sequel is a good idea. Your story was specifically about Kayla's struggles and her blooming relationship with Ether. You can write a mini story showing how their life has become, but there's pretty much nothing else to write about as a sequel, (unless you already have a good storyline planned out). That's just my opinion, but it's up to you in the end.

sequal, sequal, sequal, sequal, or when possible at least :S

Tell me now I'm crying Ether smiled T_T omg omg I'm just happy

Finally! Omaygod my feels! FINALLY AFTER MANY MANY CHAPTERS AND HAPPENING YOU FINALLY SAID IT ETHER CONGRATULATIONS YOU PROVED TO US YOU ARE A GUY NOT GAY JOOOOOKE HAHAHA 3

What did you do Ether? At first I actually thought ether was a stripper joke okay omg Ether follow her!

OMG! :D
I just read the epi and I was nearly weeping with joy. and now this! Yes yes yes! Thats three yes! :D One from each of the little people in my head c:

A sequel would make me so happy :D I already want to marry you :D Sequel!

this was one of the best romance books I have ever read... and yes I said book cause it needs to be published... you should definately write a sequel!

Please sequel :) and once I have time, I shall go read your new story!