Oh man! Please write more! I want to know what happens next?!

Love it! Can't wait for more!

Aww man. I was looking forward to this :( its okay, ill wait!

Keep writin pleeeeeease ヾ(＠ー＠)ノ
Such a good story to start off with, u must continue!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!

OH BLOODY SH**! Girl-PLEASE PLEASE TELL ME YOU ARE GOING TO CONTINUE THIS STORY? There is NO WORDS to explain the THRILL AND EXCITMENT I got out of this! I will cut off my right arm for more! YOU HAVE COMPLETELY STOLEN MY BREATH AND HEART ALREADY IN JUST THIS ONE CHAPTER! I WILL DEFINITELY BE JUMPING AND BOUNCING FOR MORE OF THIS STORY!

I like the store so far please up date soon.

Can't wait to see what you do with this story! Nice chapter!

omg wow! this was so unique and interesting! im interested to hear more from you! but how old is she, does she have any other family, whos Paul etc. I kind of want more back story but not too much, haha, but i
enjoyed this im excited to hear more keep it up :)

love the chapter, please update asap

I don't have an account but this is REALLY GOOD!

Only one chapter, but I love it so far

Awwwww... I have a feeling that I'm gonna fall in love with this story! :D

The is so cool! :D A great idea and I really like Evie. Please, please update quickly! I hope you continue! :)