You wrote this very well, keep it up.

This is absolutely beautiful! :'(

I had enjoyed reading this because it did make me think. It made me think of someone. I especially love your last line in this for it does strike a chord with one's heart. Yes, it tugs at my heart strings. "Sometimes you love someone not for the things they say or the stuff they do. It's what they are, as a whole, because they are so human." - What do I mean by this? It is the love that you feel from someone. I do mean FEEL.

that was beautifully written. very deep. and so true :)
check out mine maybe? s/3071331/1/A-Broken-Melody