Hahaha I absolutely love your writing style! It's awesome! And I love the humor as well :D

OMG OMG OMG EDGE /7/ This is awesome! I love it thank you so much !

I was blushing the whole first part ;/v/; It was so cute and adorable!

I love you so much for this, THANK YOU 333

One word to describe all this. Awesome with a capital AWESOME!
Please write more of this and update soon!

Ahahahahaha! All the references! All the hilarity!
*giggles, laughs, chokes, collapses and rolls around on the floor crying and wheezing*
This is fantastic! Pffft, Mikan is awesome—got to be one the best narrators I've ever read. Lmao! His dad is such a douche! He had to know that Kanade's Mikan's girlfriend. Dating and marrying your kid's girlfriend's mother; I dub thee the biggest douche of a dad EVER.
Also your writing has improved a lot, ne? :3
Eh, whatever.
Write more of this.
WRITE. MORE. OF. THIS!

Edge, this story... this story...
It's killing me, bwahahahahahahahaha!
Seriously, this is so hilarious I can't even breathe properly. I mean... I didn't even expected that his father's going to marry his girlfriend's mother. That was one of the most hilariously sad thing that could happen to a man. And the story seems to flow rather perfectly, and I am glad to read this story. So, please keep up the good work, Edge, and I'm going to wait for the next chapter.

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I really loved this story! It made me laugh a lot and the characters weren't just a big jumble of mess put together. You could actually relate to them. Not only that but your descriptions of places and charactes were quite helpful. Please keep writing! Please!

woah. You weren't kidding when you said you thought I could relate to this story. It's as if you picked into my mind to find my fantasies, dreams, and nightmares, and then added a bit of your godliness and put them all into a blender.
*erases three paragraphs worth of extremely compromising private information*
Heck, even the beginning of Mikan's narration sounds similar to what I think when I'm around my childhood friend, especially when I'm daydreaming about my life a cheesy childhood friend romance.

I almost died laughing, this is very well written. Are you planning to continue this, because it's funny!

lmfao. Sounds awesome. Continue please! :)