Aw, I'm glad Tarvos has a stratos now. I wonder what will happen between David and the Cut Throat Crew now.

Ares and Tarvos relationship is cute. I hope they get together. I sort of don't really care about Dante now. He's a butt-butt.

Oh,wow, what an epic way to end the chapter. Will Dove help or hurt the Dius? Poor Dante is still so confused, it is actually quite funny. I am pumped for more!

I'm glad that Tarvos said yes. I'm sure they'll have a wonderful relationship. Sawtooth continues to mystify me.

Spades and Dove had great outlooks on the war. Too bad the others don't see what they do, or maybe they're just blind. Then again, I do see their views on it too, and Hearts made a lot of good points.

So, the truth came out about Diablo. Man, he sort of screwed over Tarvos and Ares, so I think they bonded over being in that position but I could be wrong. I think their friendship is sweet so they make good stratos. I wonder if Dove and David will fight, or if the Cut Throat Crew will run away from them.

I really like Ares, but I have to wonder why he's so spiteful and mean to Dante. I wonder what Tarvos will say to his question. Now I shall read on.

I'm glad that Tarvos and Ares are together. I feel sorry for Dante but I think he deserves it. You really showcased the conflicting opinions of the Arcane and the Dius and humans. I wonder what will happen now that Dove is there.

There was a nice fight between the Cut Throat Crew and the main cast. Clubs comments on Lannad were humorous and how she handled it had me chuckling to myself. It then changed into a verbal debate before Dove showed up, saving Spades again. I sense a brother-sister showdown.

a shodown iz about 2 happen. i want to se doves and david face off.

The first line I read had me hooked. I felt compelled to read forward, and I was not disappointed.
The ending I feel fit perfectly. I can almost sense the oncoming events. A huge feeling of destruction seems to be looming in the air and I like it! I don’t know if I would call it a cliffhanger, but I definitely cannot wait to read the next chapter.
I rather like the narrator. She seems down to earth and very intelligent. Don’t know why, and I’m probably wrong, but I feel like ‘Death’ is capriciouscarnage. I didn't really get a feel from him other than that he seems a tad bit odd. Especially after seeing the question he randomly asked. I wonder how a person could really answer that. Then again, this is the prologue. How would I really get a feel for anyone other than the narrator? Sorry about that.
You’re writing style is lovely. It is in first person, yet I feel as if I’m reading third person due to all of the lovely details you have added. Just enough detail so that I know what is going on, but not so much detail that I feel overwhelmed in the prologue.
I love this story so far and I am sure that it will continue to get better. I’m not all too sure what is going to happen plot wise. I have a few guesses, but I’m not too sure yet. But, then again, you did kind of outline what would happen in the third paragraph from the bottom.
Overall, great job. Your writing skills are impressive. I didn't notice anything wrong, grammar wise or structure wise. Now, I’m off to read the next chapter.

Dante, you are such an ass without knowing it.

Sawtooth is interesting. I wonder if he's like Cyra was, one of the Kefros race or if he's something entirely different. He's a being of question. Why is he dressed like that? Where is he from? How does he know so much? Who is he?

Ares is actually a lovable guy, despite the claims about him. I wonder if it's propaganda or the truth. I hope Tarvos says yes, they both seem happy around each other and they have a history. They also both gave the readers more insight on Diablo.

He's slowly turning into a character I don't like. I wonder what his side of this story is.

I am review 400!

Now a coherent review:

Dam cliffhanger! Updaaaateeee!

...or maybe not so coherent.

Man, I didn't expect any of this. I thought there would be a happy get together between Ares and Tarvos but I didn't expect all of this stuff about Diablo to come out. I'm starting to really dislike Diablo, and that says a lot since I was willing to give him a chance and think there was more to his side of the story when Londa shot him. Maybe he was just as evil as Lannad made him out to be.

A lot of people are feeling bad for Dante and while his situation does suck, I think he's right about Tarvos wanting Diablo back. Tarvos did a lot that seemed like it was for Dante, but at the same time I believe he was doing it for personal gain and because Oz was pulling his strings the whole time. Remember guys, Tarvos is like a puppet of Oz. They needed destruction to rebuild the Earth and make the new world.

Tarvos' actions always keep me guessing.I wonder if he'll accept Ares' offer and what exactly Diablo did to him to make him feel so hateful towards him.

I /LOVE/ Ares and I think he's perfect for Tarvos. He's vindictive and funny. I like his snarky remarks to things and how he and Tarvos act to each other. It's adorable. I can say I actually am against Dante on this one. Even if it's his past, he sort of screwed them both over.