nice poem!

Very good

Remember what I always say. "Guys are stupid." Best philosophy in life:) Okay, not really. I am sure that he will open up eventually. It takes time. Being the critic I am, I have to say note something you have to fix. In the tenth line, you need to add 'thing' after 'some'. Entertain him, and he will open up to you gradually. Okay, I a being a hypocryte because I have never had a boyfriend, but that is what I have noticed from seeing other relationships. You WILL find a door.

Well, that's weird. Get it, weird? Well, never mind that but anyway I liked it and it stinks that you're going through that (or were you making it up? anyway . . .)

That was really pretty. Show it to him. Admit your feelings.

sigh. if only guys were more understandable.

It's really awesome! He unicycles?!
One word: tots. That outta bring back some memorirs...