This is really good. I like it :)

I do like your poem, it has a lot of emotion and thought put into it. I'm just confused with the story you're giving out. I don't know if you were together or not at the start and what happened towards the end. There are several moments when i completely get sucked in with your poem but I lose it cause of the way you formatted it. Maybe you could consider changing some of the words could help it flow better and be an even more awesome poem. Gjob tho, its a lovely poem.

This is such a good poem, i love it!

Wonderful articulation of complicated emotion!
The 3rd and 2nd to last stanzas are my favorites.