Hm...this one made me think. At first I thought you were perhaps describing some kind of ghost town, but then I thought more than you could be writing about a state of mind? It reads to me like a portrait of the inside of a very desperate person's mind, someone who feels lost and alone that kind of thing? I really like it anyway. :D

Stunning work, I loved the easy flow and read it over and over again because it was like a breath of fresh air each time.
It gives me an image that I now want to sketch.

Excruciatingly beautiful descriptive writing. It sends a shiver down my spine as I re-read it. What an amazing piece of poetry.

I think this would be a brilliant prologue to a gripping murder story. The imagery is fantastic and gripping, yet vague enough to leave the reader wondering what the warning was about. In my opinion, it comes across as a warning but I could be way off there. Brilliant as always!

This would go great with a horror movie. I think my favorite lines are "Haunting, hunting
Waiting, longing" I see someone almost turning into a ghost and sitting at the train station waiting.
:)

Brilliant as always :)

xx

an/too lazy to type right or sign in. I loved it as it had almost a halloween spooky feel to it.

The imagery here is absolutely phenomenal. I think my favourite part was "The decadent footsteps falling into place," just fantastic. That's all I can say about it, fantastic. Good work my friend! :D