Wow, talk about creepy! I'm really curious as to what will happen to Vereo, and when the time comes, whether she will choose to stay with Ra, or go back to the future. So much mystery. Please update!

Whoa. my. Gosh. That picture of her, with that book, with Bastet and Ammit on the front cover ... Ahh too much suspense

Finally! I have awaiting this chapter for a while. It's really good, as always. I can't wait to read more!

A NEW CHAPTER OMG ! SO happy that you'll be updating regularly :D I hope you did well on your exams! :)

LOL that awkward moment when Ra catches her staring at him... :P
That creature - Ammit - whoa, that was what Bastet sent after her!? Thank goodness Sasha saved the day :D I can't wait to read what happens next update soon!

This story is completely addicting! :D
Please update!

Okay... I'm hooked. I just started reading this a couple days ago and you have absolutely captured my attention. I started out a little apprehensive because it seemed kind of "Night at the Museum"-ish, but it's completely different and I love it! Keep up the good work!

Z

Whaaa ... holy hell, this is getting complicated! :D The bit about Ra's traitory-ness was a bit unnerving, to tell the truth ... please don't let Vereo fall for a villain! I thought Ra was a good person :O Update soon I want to find out!

Wow, this story just gets better and better! The plot is really thickening. I look forward to updates.

Okay so I know for plot purposes you are going to have them go back toEgypt and it's going to be a whole mess to get Vereo's soul back because that makes the story longer, but lemme just rant to Pharaoh for a minute:

ARE YOU SUCH AN IDIOT THAT YOU'RE GOING TO LET HER TRADE HER SOUL TO SET FOOT ON EGYPTIAN SOIL? NOOOOOO.

Oh, and V:

DON'T DO IT!

Wow, I loved this chapter! I know that this is a bit corny but I hope that they'll be able to be together :)

I loved hearing ra's pov it was very interesting

WHOA RA'S POV! _ Ra/Vereo OTP OMG WHAT!? Vereo is really going to go with him to Egypt! And he found out! :O OMG. Things are picking up fast. Please update soon!

I ship it. I SHIP IT, OKAY? THERE IS NO DESTROYING OF MY SHIPS.

Oooooooh! Things just got bad-ass. D

I am I love with Team Horrible Histories.
I really like her attitude and her brother keeps getting better.
Ra sounds like a complete hottie.
Ankhe doesn't stand a chance against vereo.
This is very well written.