Wow, amazing chapter! Can't wait to read more.

Glad to hear the new! Can't wait fornext chapter!

YAY FINALLY AN UPDATE! YESS OMG the action begins! Hooray for Vereo/Ra! They must stop Ankhe before she takes over the world! :O

That was truly amazing. I loved it.

Wow, this was really good! So emotional and it really caught my attention. Keep up the good work!

Vereo is so clever
U r too since u wrote this complicated story yourself. Have fun putting it together and know that I will be following your progress.

WHOA. That was ... rather sudden. LOL YEAHHH for Vereo/Ra! :DDD
I hope the museum thing wasn't a trap set by Ankhe though ... *suspense* Update soon! XD

Wow. Loving the story. Ra and V especially. I think that their awesome characters. I wonder if any of them are based on people you know, because they seemed to be well thought out.

Loved that chapter
Vereo is so kickass
I'm so excited about what's going to happen next

I laughed soo hard
This is the best story I've read in a while

I hope nothing bad happens to Vereo ... and where's the true love!? I can't wait to see them fall in love! :DDD

Ermahgerd. Because I have no other word for it ... Bastet is such a TROLL! OMG.

"Dean," I say, as we wind though the seemingly countless back alleys of the city of Giza. Yes, I named my new friend Dean. Because apparently, Ancient names are always hard to pronounce. "Where are we going? We should sail to Sparta. I heard the guys there are totally ripped."

OMG. I totally admire your skill at being able to send your audiences into fits of laughter. Teach me! LOL jk
But then, on another note ... Bastet, omg. That last line ... she'd better not force Vereo to sell her soul!

HEYHEY AGAIN!
LOL no problemo about long chapters, it provides more background info! :D

Vereo HAS got some attitude ... And romantic scenes!? OMG! When!?