|Reviews for Renegade|
| Y. S. Wong 5/21/13 . chapter 8
Love the dynamic between Aven and her mom.
The UG folks sure hate the Exiles' guts. Bridging this gap is obviously gonna be a major theme of Renegade what with Damien and all.
Unexpected to see Yu singing. What is this, UG Idol? The situation sounds serious, though. Looking forward to Aven in combat.
| Y. S. Wong 5/21/13 . chapter 7
Oho, so Yushan is a philandering womanizer, eh? Interesting.
Aww, Cyrus is such a party pooper.
Looks like Damien's set on the path to become an Elite. Let's see how he does.
Happy New Year to you too!
| Y. S. Wong 5/18/13 . chapter 6
Interesting. Yushan is Aven's brother. And I smell a Daven ship brewing. Ohoho-YES, YES, AVALINA SHIP PLEASE.
Hmm. Joel from Vormund has his spinny chair and now Yushan has his table. What is it with these top guys and office furniture? I smell a Yutable ship.
Some interesting developments and tidbits of information this chapter. Gonna be interesting to see how things go from here.
| Y. S. Wong 4/2/13 . chapter 5
"Their hair wavered as they both engaged in a sort of contest of the will through the act of staring." lol. Found this hilarious for some reason. Such a shounen thing to do.
Aven's mum. Haha. Another perverted old woman. It's funny how many perverted old people you meet in these manga stories.
Damien to become an Elite, huh? Interesting.
I dunno if it's because it's been a few weeks since the last time I read this, but I really liked your battle scene this chapter. The action was intense and hard-hitting. Keep up the good work.
| Argentum Vir 4/1/13 . chapter 2
That mummy guy is forking scary. I'd hate to encounter him in a dark alleyway at any time of day. I also like your image of magic. Instead of it being a novelty (like Wong's version) you've made it into an integral part of life and war. I'm also glad you made it into a potential for discrimination. If magic existed in real life and only a few people could effectively use it, I'd imagine it would make a lot of fuss.
My previous criticisms still apply. You also have a lot of spelling errors as well.
| XxmikoxkogaxX 3/11/13 . chapter 4
I just love how you jumped into the main story! Omg, Aven might just be really strong. I want to see more of what katalina and Damien can do! XD can't wait to read more :))
| XxmikoxkogaxX 3/11/13 . chapter 3
Lol I already love Katalina character! Damien seem like a pretty badass character himself. But to be honest, Aven seem pretty weak. But what do I know, it's only chapter 3
Hehe on to the next chapter :3
| XxmikoxkogaxX 3/11/13 . chapter 2
I think this is going to be another hit!
I thought restart was good, I see you becoming better as a write .
Keep up the good work Thundy :)
| McMicah 3/5/13 . chapter 15
Whoa. Well now we know. Do not. Tick off. AUZ! No wonder Aven was so scared of him. I kind of thought the perfectly reasonable request from the one pirate did not deserved to be so harshly turned down, especially since it was coupled with (and somewhat compared to) something as trivial as supplies.
An interesting chapter, though I hoped that the whole ordeal would have been handled more honorably, but since the whole second fight and pirates kind of made that impossible.
| kingofe3 3/3/13 . chapter 15
And now I don't like him anymore. Dude was a beast.
| Y. S. Wong 3/3/13 . chapter 4
Fabian is kimochi warui. Desu.
I sense a developing plotline around Bandages. Looks like he's gonna be crucial for the story. He might know something about the circumstances that the others don't.
The random bits of humor interjected throughout each chapter are neat.
| kingofe3 3/3/13 . chapter 14
"The young man stepped of the car and took a deep breath." Forgot the word "out".
Aven seems to have her own set of abilities. Olivia has two opposing personality sides.
| kingofe3 3/3/13 . chapter 13
"A police officer does not wait for a robber to get ready before he does," Auz is funny. I like him already.
| kingofe3 3/3/13 . chapter 12
Bridgewater vs. Aven? This should be interesting.
| kingofe3 3/3/13 . chapter 11
I knew something like this would happen (though not in this way), but I'm shocked nonetheless.