|Reviews for Death|
| hyashi 55 11/10/12 . chapter 1
well, it is ok but umm, some don't really rhyme and repeating words doesn't count you know but overall it's nice and i liked it. well, i could say it was awesome too. i mean you used really good words in it anyway. YOU ARE A REAL POET! and i hope you feel very touched for me saying that and speaking of that keep in touch ok?