|Reviews for Into Daylight|
| phantom130 5 2/23/13 . chapter 20
LOL I enjoyed the awkward conversation with Natty and that lady at the store. I found it particularly funny when she asked Natty if her friend was gay XD
I'm surprised though just how easy going Natty's parents seem. I mean Natty's father is completely clueless.
| phantom130 5 2/23/13 . chapter 19
I liked the scene with the computer. I wonder if Lewis will ever meet some more of his fans. I found it surprising though just how quickly Natty's friends seemed to believe her about Lewis though. I would have liked to see the sort of uncomfortable conversation between Natty and her friends where she has to explain that Lewis did come back from the past.
Also love the end. I guess Lewis is addicted to hamburgers now XD
| Luckycool9 1/28/13 . chapter 41
Wow! What a three chapter! I like how Natty and Lewis relationship is devolping at an awesome pace. Can't wait to see what happened by the end of it.
| phantom130 5 1/20/13 . chapter 15
LOL! Love the end of this chapter. It's so embarrassing, but she had to do whatever it took to cheer up Lewis, even if it meant singing One Direction XD
| phantom130 5 1/20/13 . chapter 14
I don't know how you did it, but somehow you were able to make a man eating McDonalds sound interesting XD
| phantom130 5 1/20/13 . chapter 13
LOL! The last two lines in this chapter are so true :P
| phantom130 5 1/20/13 . chapter 12
LOL! Love the One Direction diss! I can just imagine how strange that would have been for Lewis to see XD
| phantom130 5 1/20/13 . chapter 11
Haha, Lewis is adjusting well, but he still has so much to learn :P
| phantom130 5 1/20/13 . chapter 10
Aww, this chapter is so sweet :3
| phantom130 5 1/20/13 . chapter 9
LOL! Loved the scene with the sink! Also good job at keeping Lewis' personality and knowledge relevant to his time period. I can imagine that you must have to had to have done a lot of research.
| phantom130 5 1/20/13 . chapter 8
lol liked this scene:
"2012," I answer lamely, because I can't think of anything more profound to tell him.
"No, Lewis. Year 2012…this is September 2012. The future. And you are in it."
It's going to be hard for Lewis to adjust at first.
| phantom130 5 1/20/13 . chapter 7
I hope Natty and Lewis' friendship can progress. It will be neat to see what this story leads to later on. :P
| Leasah 1/12/13 . chapter 40
"Why dontcha show me how that goes, Miss Natty?" Oh, Lewis.
| cypress16 1/11/13 . chapter 40
I suppose Lewis is just internally screwing up his courage and pushing forward. Natty's grinning at him expecting a problem could be contributing to his reaction. (a don't let them see you sweat courage)
Ah Natty ... a maybe unconscious but very forceful claiming of Lewis as hers in the face of interest by another female. Well played...
| Leasah 12/28/12 . chapter 39
A bit short, but Yay! for you updating. :)
(It could be that I found it short because I read all the other chapters almost in one go, lol)
I'm so curious of what will come.