This is a great first poem. May you continue to fill the world with these images. I like the line length and how this is under 100 words. (sucker for a short poem.) Continue to write. :)

I prefer Arthurian mythology/Shakespeare/Pre-Ralphite, the whole thing, I'm not really a BIG fan of the supernatural. Twilight made me despise werewolves. But this was so good, I enjoyed it! Beautiful first poem!

Hermie