Wow...I need to revisit this to give an actual review...this is brilliant. Give me a day or two :)

I'm not quite sure what this is about seeing as it was all rather long run-on sentences with lots of words. But, I'd like to applaud you if your intent was to make it purposefully confusing and babbling which I hope was your intention. I did like some of your interesting comparisons and word choices but because I prefer more visually organized pieces, I'm sure I do not appreciate this as much a one should.