WOWOWOWOWOWOW

that was amazing and so touching.

both chapters

its so... touching

Words couldnt really describe it

I loved it

Raven
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live on the wild side

Good story. I don't really know what to say about it. Good job. I'm pretty much done. Later daze!

Excellent!!! lol I've read it before, but I still like it!

Dude, what a sweet idea to show both sides!! I liked that one too! I'd tell ya more about what i think, but we're about to leave and I gotta pet the kitties! (hey, wouldn't it be great if it were true? maybe it is....) ~Don Quixote de la Mancha (was that where he was from? lol oh well)

Wow Chelsea! That was GOOD i thought. I really liked it, and it made me feel sad for you. It made me feel like i know how u feel. But, luckily, after I write this i am going to play with my grandma's kittens so I won't be sad for u anymore. (i am at grandma and grandpa's house). I am going to try and squeeze out some poetry from this ole' dry well of mine and u can read it, but I'll tell ya when I get any. So any wayz, I really liked the poem (Geeze, I keep spelling poem, peom instead!! *pulls out hair*), and i think its so cool that like I'm having dreams and ur having dreams and we right poems about them and it's like ummm.... poetic-ping-pong or something..... KITTY-TIME!!! WOOOOO!!!! Yurs fo' eva' ~Don Quixote
Dude... I just noticed there is another chapter!! I'll read it too!!

Nice story