it's so cute, I liked how it was pacy yet not rushed, slow enough, yet not broing. good job

I love short, sweet and uncomplicated. Write on! :)

I like it. There were a couple of typos but nothing big. But I do like the male POV, I think you did it very well. And it's a good ending!

awww how cute! are you going to continue with this? i would love to read more! :)