At first I thought this poem would have a sad atmosphere to it, yet reading it gave me a sense of acceptance and reality. I enjoyed this poem very much.

Such wonderful imagery. Such fleeting moments come and go so quickly, and you developed that idea very well in your piece! Great!

ah...so incredibly beautiful I really felt the words and emotion. Wonderful absolutely wonderful.
It was short and sweet and showed a lot about certain events in life that happen often.
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