|Reviews for Incandescence|
| ALovelyAsianxx 4/3/13 . chapter 6
Hehehe this is so great! I love Fern(: But she's hiding something, isn't she? Mysterious! I like it(: Ah she and Mitchell are gonna fall in love, aren't they? I hope so! But I want to hear more with Ashlynn and Trent! :D They're gonna be meeting soon in real life, right? Or something like that... Goodness my memory is awful. I think the only way to solve this problem is for you to update more often! I know I would be happier...(:
| BrownEyedCutie99 2/1/13 . chapter 5
Who has got their hands on Fe-ern? I wonder who it could be. BTW: you take a ridiculously long time to update.
| leavesfallingup 2/1/13 . chapter 5
I need to go back in the story to find out why Fern allowed Andi to slap her... and why she then felt free to kick the crap out of Mitchell.
Now, since you've left us with a cliff-hanger, I am confident that right now you are typing the next chapter... in fact, you haven't even had time to read this review because of the feverish pace at which you are typing... I'm sure that you will post any minute now... (whistling)... (walking around the room straightening things)... (checking watch)...
Perhaps I didn't make myself clear? where did you mention that you lived? No reason! Really! (cracks knuckles)
| Lillean Prescott Adaria 2/1/13 . chapter 5
ITS MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE AND I KNOW WHO SPUN HER AROUUUND! :) PM ME IF YOU WANNA KNOW! HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAHAAAAAAAAAAAA!
| Lotus Amaryllis 2/1/13 . chapter 5
Hi there...i like Fern, she's cool.
Uh...maybe mitchell turned her around? I dunno. crazy guess.
Ok, I promise I'll update mine on FF! I jus have SO MUCH TO DO and stuff.
And you finnaly update too. On your prifile, it said hopefully you'll get it done by Feb...its 2/1!
Ah ok so update alright? I'll update to.
| Guest 1/16/13 . chapter 4
WHAT THE HELL ashlyn? that was a dumb plan though...
ok, another mistake i found was on the 2nd text. You said "tren trin contest" when it was supposed to be "trenT trin contest"
Anywy, i have realized I sounded quite a ways like a b!tch in the previous reviews... sorry if you were offened by me correcting you...anywy, I want to tell you that this is a nice story & could go far.
i will check out lilly prescott adaria's work.
as of now...
DAMMIT just update already!
| Guest 1/16/13 . chapter 3
oh yeah, I just remembered the mistake...sometime earlier, you said Ashlyn's eyes were a CERULEAN color... but then, at the lunch scene, you said "brown-colored eyes"...
oh yeah, and a star *****
| Guest 1/16/13 . chapter 3
ok chapter...but Ifound some mistakes...
First, u said "previous gifts" as the code, thn "yesterday's gft" wtf?
you also said something like (too lazy to scroll back up & look, long chapter) "she [something] at THE Ashlyn and Rebecca"...its not supposed to be a the.
and there was something in the lunch scene with Avery...,but i'm, again, too lazy to scroll back up and look for the mistake inthe jumble of words... but other than that, nice chappy :3
| Guest 1/16/13 . chapter 2
omg i heart megan &liz! I also like th VERY long chappy...
| Guest 1/16/13 . chapter 1
Um...ok then...on to chap. 2
| leavesfallingup 12/26/12 . chapter 4
Ah, the joy of having siblings! All of Ashlyn's well-laid plans fall to dust and drift to the floor.
| Lillean Prescott Adaria 12/26/12 . chapter 4
Hey it's Lilly here! Holà! I'm in ssssppppaaaaiiiin! Btw loved this part! Mitchell is adorable! I want to pinch his non-existent chubby... Big cheeks! I won't update in quite a while since I'm enjoying free vacation time in Spain! Feel free to ask questions about Spain AND Emmy's story! I haven't forgot her... Yet. (Cheeky smile) lol I nvr will forget her :):) she is my nearest friend in the whole wide world! Hear that Emmy? U r my bestest friend in the friend in the whole woooooooooooorrrelllld!
| BrownEyedCutie99 12/25/12 . chapter 4
I really like this story! I hope you update REEEAAAAAALLLLL soon because I can't get enoughof this story! It's so wonderful! (wipes tears from eyes)
| Lotus Amaryllis 11/19/12 . chapter 2
Hey! Could I write a song for you? Thanks! If I can!
| Lotus Amaryllis 11/19/12 . chapter 1