|Reviews for zebra strips|
| imsopretty44 11/12/12 . chapter 1
This could have been much better. I am not saying this is bad; not at all! But it could've been longer, it could've had better grammar, and, lastly, it could have had more feeling! It is very clear and obvious that this came from the heart, and I admire that. I love Zebra's too!
I hope you do not take this to offense, because I surely did not mean for this to be offensive in any way. My point is that this is sweet, but could have been better.
Michielle G. Ricen