|Reviews for The Ashes of the Event, Book One - A Legacy of Ruin|
| MustangMel1968 1/27/13 . chapter 12
Excellent battle sequence! Awesome that you also have the slavegirl kicking ass! Thanks for updating, I'll await your next chapter with keen anticipation.
| MustangMel1968 1/16/13 . chapter 11
Uh oh! A fight with two girls? Lol!
Another awesomely well-written chapter!
| MustangMel1968 12/18/12 . chapter 10
Another fascinating and well-written chapter! You covered a lot of ground with this one; can't wait for the next.
| MustangMel1968 12/11/12 . chapter 9
Wow! A lot going on here. A pirate fight, the princess in danger, the vampire saving her; good stuff indeed! Can't wait for more.
| MustangMel1968 12/4/12 . chapter 8
Fascinating! I think I get more excited with each installment of this story; and now the sailors might have to defend the ship and it's unknown, precious cargo? Ahoy, a fair fight on the high seas awaits!
| MustangMel1968 12/2/12 . chapter 7
Another well written and interesting chapter. A little more information about why Douler has the princess. Also the Captain and his woman are an extremely interesting pair! Thank you for updating. I can't wait for the next chapter.
| MustangMel1968 11/27/12 . chapter 6
Oh! A fight in the desert, and the princess wakes up? Interesting! And sad that she didn't yet get rescued. I'll wait for the next chapter.
| Lynda 11/22/12 . chapter 1
Stunning! I love every word.. off to read the rest you have posted, I'm hooked!
| MustangMel1968 11/21/12 . chapter 5
Wow! Just when I think I've figured this out, you throw in another twist! Thanks for yet another fascinating and well written chapter.
| MustangMel1968 11/20/12 . chapter 4
Interesting developments indeed! Yet another twist and turn to this already fascinating story by adding yet another magical creature, the undead, into the mix! Great chapter!
| MustangMel1968 11/20/12 . chapter 3
Fascinating chapter, well written as always! I am new to the fantasy genre so the vampire who can practice bloodmagick has enthralled me. I can hardly wait to see what happens next. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story.
| MustangMel1968 11/16/12 . chapter 2
Another awesomely wonderful chapter. I was pleasantly surprised with the magic of the seer. I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for sharing this with us.
| MustangMel1968 11/12/12 . chapter 1
This seems to be a very promising story! It has an excellent plotline that hints of a great deal of action to come and it is very well written. I can hardly wait until you post another chapter!