absolutely brilliant! I'm still kicking myself over having doubts when seeing that it was a "mere chapter" long. Thank you for writing this

This was a really good story. I really liked it. You probably just should have separated the chapters. That's usually how people post stories.

This is wonderful!I love this story.

hi lol, i started readin expecting a one-shot story (tho the summary looked potentially long) and ended up reading everything XD It's quite a nice story, at one point it reminded me of Beauty and the beast, the beauty showing up on the beast's doorstep and a matronly housekeeper...never mind, i probably make no sense..

Beautiful story. I have found some spelling mistakes but it was oh-so-sweet! It was also well written, you did a very good job.

ok its 4:30 am at the moment and im finally finished
absolutely fantastic story, i really want to read the sequel but i feel that i need to go to sleep :D

you should update your sequel btw

Aw! That's so cute! :D :D :D

I've got one three words for you. Awsome. Completly awsome.

LOVE IT! Every character was so real and had realistic elements to further the plot.

Wow, that was a great story! I'm an avid reader of romance novels and I really enjoyed reading this. It was like reading a real book all the way through. I do enjoy not having to wait for authors to write and upload their chapters.

Keep on writing!Britt

Ps. I love the name Celest :D

wow. great story =] i almost didn't read this, but then i saw how its only a chapter. i really like how you put everything together =] nicely done! ok, now im off to read "my brother's keeper" =D i love jerry's character =]

A wonderful story! Couldn't tear my eyes away from the screen. You set everything up beautifully - especially your characters. You did such a great job detailing them and giving each their own unique qualities.

Congratulations on a great story! I'll have you read the sequal and some of your other stories.

~Silver

aw, this is such a beautiful story, very well-written! can't wait for the next ones

this is such a sweet and great story. i like how all the chapters are in 1 chapter, i just kept on scrolling down and down.. instead of waiting for the next chpater to load. but anyway, i really liked the story, it was realistic, funny and SO sweet with great characters!

good story! good plot! great charachters! i think that the jasmine/joshua relationship is more lust than love...