|Reviews for Who You Pretend To Be|
| MeribethSC 5/18/13 . chapter 13
I wonder what she wants to do, right now I am trying to think what I want to do :-(. Anyway sorry I took so long to read this, now that I check is been only 7 days lol, I been busy with school :-(. So you only have one more chapter and that's it right? I wonder how your going to put everything together, also you could have make this story longer by putting a new guy inside the life of Kat, and when Dylan comes back he get jealous because the guys is been helping Kat get through everything in her life. Oh well am anticipating the last chapter. Is it one more or two more am not sure anyway FIGTHING!..
| Strangershadow 5/15/13 . chapter 13
That's so much like Kat- treating the situation in an optimistic way and still hoping for the best. I salute her for being so awesome and you for writing such a nice character.
The part of Dylan thinking about how he would have to kiss another girl actually made me chill a little. That's when I actually realised the intensity of the situation he was in, and how completely heartbroken he must have been. I'm also shocked to see so many changes happen in such little time with Kat, but I'm glad Vic left for the better. She must have so much pressure- from school and home, both.
Somehow, it would've been interesting if Kat had paid a visit to Dylan's room- seen how he lived, if there was any mention of her in any part of his room or anything.
I liked this chapter, you just keep on getting better and better. And I'd love to see an epilogue where you showed a scene of them after they become a couple :)
The only thing wrong with this chapter was that it got over too fast because I wanted to read more, which is why I can't wait for your next update! Take your time, though :)
| Sereana Marie 5/14/13 . chapter 13
Write more soon I really want to see how its going to end up!
| crazy cat lady 5/12/13 . chapter 13
D: thats depressing! I WOULD BE FURIOUS!
| AnimeMemories2013 5/11/13 . chapter 1
OMG this is really good first chapter and so much better than mine XD anyway love it!
| Strangershadow 4/19/13 . chapter 12
And this is me- the author of 'Perfect' if you remember :) You recommended this story to me and I can never say no.. I don't have an account on Fictionpress, so I can't log in and review, sorry :(
Coming to your story, I am really amazed by the amount of effort and work you've put in it. I can see it in you A/N's that you're doing the very best to write the best that you can to please your readers and it has to be applauded. During the course of the story, I can actually see your writing improving bit by bit, and becoming more and more professional :)
The plot is as gripping as it is heart-breaking. I had guessed all along that Moses must've suicided, but it was still horrible to read it and have it confirmed .
Your characters are very relatable, especially Kat. 90% of the girl population are mad over a celebrity, and the celebrities thank them for it, but no one never really appreciates those 10% girls who are not drooling over some famous guy but who have an actual personality of their own. You've shown here a character who's emotionally and mentally wrecked but who refuses to be weak, and that in itself is a story that I appreciate :)
Sorry for such a long review XP, I have a bad habit of writing reeeeeaaally long reviews, but I wanted to tell you that this story has got that humor, that underlying angst and romance all in it. I just noticed one thing- that you wrote 'surprised' as 'surprized'. I don't know if you corrected it in the later chapters, I was too busy immersed in the plot. I'm happy Kat's found Dylan, but then he's left! XO :(
Keep writing and I'll keep on reading.
| Shin M. Hiram 2/24/13 . chapter 12
Of course it does! (Sorry for the late review) give me a shout whenever!
Only 3 more chapters?! What!? Don't do this to me! You gotta continue, make a sequel or something! Please D:
| Sereana Marie 2/14/13 . chapter 12
OMg, that sucks big time, I hate the producer guy! Good plot though.
| D 2/10/13 . chapter 12
what he didnt tell her?! i dont remember this part of the plan!
| MeribethSC 2/8/13 . chapter 12
Dylan is so stupid! why didn't he wrote a letter or something, doesn't he think that what he is doing is going to hurt her more, just thinking about it make me mad. Poor Kat :-( anyway it was a good chapter I can't wait to see how you fix it, or are you planing on making this a sad story? I am anxious to know what is going to happen.
| zuhred22 2/6/13 . chapter 12
AHHHH omg omg omg omg where did he go?! lol sorry, CANT WAIT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER! u r an amazing writer :D
| Sereana Marie 2/5/13 . chapter 11
OMG! You can NOT do this to me! Write the chapter! She has to say YES! She just has too!
| Sereana Marie 2/5/13 . chapter 10
Lol! I loved the chapter! I'm not at all close to mine eiether so don't feel alone I'm in that boat too. Lets hope it doesn't sink... Lol! Keep writing!
| Sereana Marie 2/5/13 . chapter 9
I didn't like the thought surcture of this chapter:(
| Sereana Marie 2/4/13 . chapter 8
... OMG! He needs to freaking kiss her!