Wow I love the attitude in this. I also like how your not writing from your view, but from someone else's. Nice work!
Steph135

Fierce. I, too, like the progression he makes from the beginning of the song all the way to the ending. Very good story telling, I like that.

I actually like this one a lot better than Misunderstood. I like the progression of the character's anger, and the contrast of "today" and "eternity" in the song. Like, something that happens in a fleeting moment has permanent repercussions.

And incidentally, Dick Thomas is a pen name. ;)

Well... it's certianly dark, and express anger very well. What i enjoyed most was the raw quality of it.
Also i think its funny you've turned a bit threatning in your summerys, like if you read you review or else! lol
but seriously i like your song here! i think it was a good out lit to just release built up emotion and that came through clearly.

This is different but I think it's really interesting. :) I like how you clarified that it wasn't about you, lol. As always, I enjoy reading your songs and definitely hope I can hear them one day. :D