|Reviews for My Eternity|
| steph135 11/18/12 . chapter 1
Wow I love the attitude in this. I also like how your not writing from your view, but from someone else's. Nice work!
| Stonehartdreamer27 11/15/12 . chapter 1
Fierce. I, too, like the progression he makes from the beginning of the song all the way to the ending. Very good story telling, I like that.
| Dick Thomas 11/14/12 . chapter 1
I actually like this one a lot better than Misunderstood. I like the progression of the character's anger, and the contrast of "today" and "eternity" in the song. Like, something that happens in a fleeting moment has permanent repercussions.
And incidentally, Dick Thomas is a pen name. ;)
| Beth Brooks 11/14/12 . chapter 1
Well... it's certianly dark, and express anger very well. What i enjoyed most was the raw quality of it.
Also i think its funny you've turned a bit threatning in your summerys, like if you read you review or else! lol
but seriously i like your song here! i think it was a good out lit to just release built up emotion and that came through clearly.
| violetfireflies 11/14/12 . chapter 1
This is different but I think it's really interesting. :) I like how you clarified that it wasn't about you, lol. As always, I enjoy reading your songs and definitely hope I can hear them one day. :D