Beautiful! It's simple in form, but it's a gorgeous message.

-Hermie

A very emotional poem that is done very well. So much can be interpreted from this piece. Amazing job, keep it up :D

wow so sad, so sad.

The last three lines are very powerful on there on, not to say that the rest was just as good. I almost got a different image for each stanza, which is great! Good poem and continue to write. :)